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Nowadays young people are spending most of their leisure time using smart phones and tablets for entertainment. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your own opinion and examples.
Answer:
Electronic entertainment devices like smart phones and tables today have occupied/invaded/encroached on/ a major portion of young people’s spare time. This new trend, in my view, is not desirable and can lead to various problems.
To begin with, electronic or online entertainment is sedentary and addictive in nature and therefore the youth are less likely to involve in outdoor physical activities potentially leading to various medical problems. For example, a young person can watch videos, play games and talk to relatives thousands of miles away on an iPad or iPhone in the comfort of his room. As a result, he may not get enough time or feel the need to be physically active, which can result in problems like vision impairment, obesity and arthritis.
Another area of serious concern is young people’s lack of interest in socialising with friends, relatives or even siblings, due to prolonged obsession with smart phones and similar devices. For instance, many parents today complain that children are not interested in talking to them during their leisure time because they may be engaged in their favourite computer game, which demands complete attention to the device. Even during meals some children are glued to their smart devices. This can have a detrimental impact on their socialisation skills and lack of sensitivity for people around.
On the other hand, this modern form of entertainment has certain positive aspects too. While on a smart phone young people are likely to watch educational videos, read current news and visit e-learning websites and make their free time productive. Tablets are very helpful in helping young children to draw, solve puzzles and learn language. In this way they can have a fun filled learning experience during their spare time.
In conclusion, smart phones and tablets do have certain benefits for young people in making their leisure time productive. Despite these advantages, their compulsive use would lead to serious physical as well as psychological issues and therefore this new trend, in my opinion is mostly negative and not desirable.
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Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations. Others, however, think that TV and the Internet are the best ways to learn about other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
250 words Time- 40 min.
In order to know about the other countries, a few people believe that travelling is utmost important. On the other hand, majority of them are quite certain that technology can play a vital role in learning about other countries culture, traditions, history, social value system, moral values, cuisine, language, literature and much more.
Nonetheless, people travel to the different countries to enrich their understanding about all the aspects of that country. Moreover, this strategy has several advantages like face-to-face conversation, real and cordial experience with the native people and personalisation with the tradition. Albeit these kinds of opportunities are available for elite class people. And, it doesn’t mean that others can’t learn about other nations.
Nowadays, we are in the era of technology which has enormously advance in some certain ways. Apparently, everyone has a smartphone which enables each one to have the access to the one of the extraordinary inventions of the 21st century that is known as “Internet or World wide web”. We could enlighten ourselves with the vast knowledge base of internet irrespective of any discipline from all around the world. As far as TV is concerned, it has inevitable foot prints in everyone’s life as we have varieties of channels based on society requirements. TV has always provided us adequate knowledge of the other countries.
In conclusion, in the dawn of the era of technology, TV and Internet has changed the societal mind set. As, these are undoubtedly easy to approach and people can utilize them according to their comfort. On top of it, it is time efficient and effective. As, time is an entity which can’t be recreated at any cost, so, we should wisely make use of it.
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Technology allows food to be produced in greater quantities and at lower prices.Some people believe that this is a positive development,while others feel that the change is harmful.Discuss both views and state your opinion?
There is an ever increasing use of technology ,in the field of agriculture, since last two decades.It is often argued that this is a positive development,whilst others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications.This essay agrees that an increase in technology for food production is beneficial to human beings for survival.This essay will discuss both point of view.
As for those who believe that technology is significant for food production,they feel this way because it will wipe out widespread hunger around the world.In other words,productivity will be more and rates of food products will be cost efficient.For example,a study last year found that hunger rates had decreased by 17 percent in Nigeria last year.In addition,they believe that mortality rate due to malnutrition will reduce dramatically.A fantastic example of this is ,the recent study conducted by WHO in Ittathupradesh,about deaths trailer to under nutrition has reduced by 3%,in contrast to 7%in previous year.
In contrast,other people hold the notion that application of technology in production of food will bring negative ramifications.Firstly this is because latest technological advancements in the field of agriculture will cut down several jobs.That is to say,with latest equipments and machineries can take place of 50 to 60 workers,leaving them unemployed.More specifically,in my native place where farming is the traditional occupation,has seen dramatic reduction of people involved in agriculture,after the introduction of modern methods in this field.
In conclusion while the benefits of technology in food production, particularly in agriculture ,will developer a hunger free world,some still feel that people should be wary of this phenomenon and will make people unemployed.
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