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Talk about a nice place for relaxation that you know and use. Please say

1. Where and what is this place?

2. Why do you go there?

3. Who do you go there with?

Please note: This answer is for demonstration only. Please use this as a hint to create your own version. It contains hints how collocation and cohesion should be built in your answer. This will increase your score. I have underlined these words for the reader’s convenience.

Introduction: After working for more than 10 hours a day as an IELTS trainer, I need a place to relax and rejuvenate. 

Body: At my home, I have developed a small study room exactly for this (referencing – cohesion) purpose. Since books rejuvinate me, I use this room for reading and relaxing for at least one hour every weekday and several hours every weekend. Usually, my younger brother, who (referencing) is also an avid (qualifier/ collocation) reader of books, accompanies me to this room. We spend valuable time discussing and evaluating books on various/ diverse topics ranging from politics to economics.

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