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Some people believe that no homework should be given to children. Others, however, say extra work is needed after school for children and teenagers in order to succeed. Discuss both views and give your opinion including reasons and relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
I’m going to give you a detailed structure. All you have to do is FILL IT UP. Plain and simple. Right? Well, no. Before we proceed, you should go through my tips on writing essays.
Like almost all IELTS essays, this topic links 2 topics. These are:
Topic 1: Homework (none or extra)
Topic 2: Children and teenagers
Since introduction involves explaining the two topics, linking them and stating your opinion, please write it in the following space (Of course you can’t write on this page. Either print it or copy paste on a computer):
Introduction (30 to 40 words):
Now, unlike previous essays, I’m going to abstain from giving you hints on body paragraphs. All I’ll say is that the essay demands “you to explain both opinions while writing body paragraphs“:
Body Paragraph 1:
Reason 1 supporting Opinion 1:
Example 1 supporting Opinion 1:
Body Paragraph 2: “Read your OPINION before proceeding.”
Reason 2 supporting Opinion 2 (Your opinion):
Example 2 supporting Opinion 2 (Your opinion):
Once you’re done with 2 body paragraphs, it is time to write a suitable conclusion. Remember, conclusion includes the elements of future and/or solution. “Can you think of a BRIGHTER future if your opinion is implemented?” I’m sure you can.
Please go through a student’s answer (as well as corrections) on this question.
That’s it. You’re ready to submit it now. Email it to firstname.lastname@example.org
Please feel free to ask any questions in the comments section.