The diagram below shows various stages involved in the production of beer.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall, the whole process of making (Repetition of word MAKING.) manufacturing beer involves with series of stages beginning from adding malted barely in milling as well as culminating at delivery.
In the first stage, malted barley is added in milling machine then these are it is transformed to the special machine which is called mashing. (Use correct pronoun. “these” is plural, while “malted barley” is singular. Prefer IT.)
In the next stage, spent grain of barley is used as animal feed into lautering. You didn’t understand the process. Please read my sample answer. A link is given at the bottom of this correction.
Malted barley is first milled, then mashed before being layered. Spent barley grains are used as animal feed while mixture (not mentioned, but interpreted) is boiled.
In the subsequent stage, this mixture is boiled after added both things such as sugar as well as hops .
Grammar: “Such as” is used to give examples. Both means SUGAR and HOPS. No need of using SUCH AS.
In the subsequent stage, the mixture is boiled while sugar and hops are added to it.
Thereafter, it is sent into a whirlpool machine, following this, it is kept into cooling cooled. (You can’t keep things into cooling, a process, but into a coolant, a machine.)
Once it has been done, yeast is mixed to this liquid mixture for fermenting and co2 then mixture is matured .in the eventual stage, beer is ready for distribute…….