Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no governmental restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
40 minutes, 250 words at least.
Some people believe that
imaginative creatorscreative people should be allowed to exploreexpress their creativity in whatever they have desire in certain mediumwhichever form they wish. There should not be any obstacles from the government laws. This essay partly agrees with the statement. In On one hand, artists share their ideas and values towards public with the public, but in on the other hand, it may appear revolution or conflict. revolutionary and in conflict with tradition.
Your ideas in the introduction are fine. However, the expression is weak. Note the words I have added.
Imaginative masters share their ideas, emotions, and feeling in words, pictures and other mediums which can directly affect the public mind.
PublicThe public can know the innovative ideas which are beneficial for all. While considering new ideas, other artists can modify and discover newmodern (used NEW twice in the same sentence. Avoid that.) things. For instance, firstly, Leonardo Da VinchiVinci thought to fly as a bird which was not possible but his thought to fly as a bird which was not possible but his thought has been appreciated by the wrightWright brothers andwho created the airplane. Some spelling mistakes and missed a few articles.
However, excessive freedom to artists can also create problems in society.
They may touch in a sensitive part which may not digest to societyTheir creativity may unintendedly hurt sentiments of a religious group or the whole society. Every religion followfollows theirits (every = singular; its) own God.
If some artists dominate the other religions and cultures that might be seed of war against religions. For example, in 19th century many people in India
waswere killed because of war between Hindu and Muslim society. On that period both followers of their religion were dominating the each other religions. (Can’t see the role of creative people in fomenting violence in these three sentences. LOST CONTEXT. Stick to the question.)
In conclusion, although freedom should be provided to creative masters to share their ideas and invention,
but(Correct construction is “Although X, Y”. There’s no “but”.) they should also be restricted on touching any sensitive areas like of religions and cultures of different society. So that in my opinion, somehow freedom should be given to artists.
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