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The bar chart below shows the percentage of children from 5 to 14 years of age in selected leisure activities in Australia.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
20 minutes, 150 words at least.
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The bar chart illustrates the ratio of girls and boys who are from five to fourteen years old
as well as engaged in describe five leisure activities in which they take part in Australia.
Overall, both boys and girls give a great deal of attention to watching television than others activities and
also both do not are interested in skate Boarding. Can’t say this. Since about 40 percent boys and 25 percent girls do this activity. In Australia, the maximum ratio of girls and boys is in the activity of watching television (You have already mentioned this above. Give all information at one place only.) which is approximately hundred percentage than others activities (It is NOT a hundred percent as compared to other activities.). While only twenty-five percentage percent girls and fifty-five percentage boys give preference to Art and Craft (You’ve read the data incorrectly. It’s 25 percent boys and 55 percent girls). Seventy-five ratio percent of boys are engaged into in computer games whereas only sixty percentage girls play computer games. (Do not try to find synonyms where none exist. “Percent” and “ratio” are very different. Computer has no exact synonyms.)
However, The least
ratio of percentage of girls is in skate Boarding. Bike riding one of the enjoyable activity with just over seventy-five ratio percent of boys and sixty percent of girls. Girls has have a similar taste in both activities which are Bike riding as well as Computer games proportion of these activities is equal in which is fifty percent. (Well, the taste is not the same. It’s just the percentage.)