Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
40 minutes, 250 words at least.
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Nowadays, the world is suffering from
a global warming and this is considered one of the most danger dangerous problems in our universe. Thus this essay will illustrate the causes of this issue and solutions that individuals and governments should be taken to solve this big matter. (Please go through any of my essay articles to study How to write an introduction – MENTION the causes.)
To begin, there are a lot of things that lead to increase the temperature of the earth and make
a global warming. One of these things is the increase in the number of manufactories manufacturing units in the developed countries, especially in Europe, that depend on gasoline and other sources of energies energy (sources may be multiple, but energy is energy. No plural here.) to switch run their machines. Unfortunately, more than fifty percent of these sources of energies energy (sources are not lost, energy is lost) are is lost as a heat in the air.
Another cause of raising the degree of temperature is a significant increase of cars
in our universe. Cars as a dominant mode of transport are also contributing to the global warming.
Although these cars may solve problems of transportation, they produce a lot of
smokes in the earth that induce warming pollution and greenhouse gases that trap Sun’s infrared light to increase atmospheric temperature. Furthermore, increasing the number of devices used in our home may cause a slight increase in universe slightly raise Earth’s temperature.
So solutions to this issue should be occurred by the responsible authorities (PASSIVE VOICE. Prefer ACTIVE VOICE) and individuals in every country to preserve our planet for harmful effects of this problem and to live a safe life. Governments, as well as individuals across the world, need to unite to find a solution to this problem and preserve our planet from the harmful impacts of global warming.
One solution is to
put formulate and implement rules that decrease the heat of emitted from the manufactories and another one is to decrease the number of cars in the street on the road. The most important solution of to this huge issue is to decrease the number of devices, such as microwave devices, air conditioners, and water heaters, in the at home that involved in warming generate heat, such as microwave devices, air conditioners and water heaters. Such as should always be connected to the word it exemplifies. In this case, it gives examples of DEVICES and not WARMING.
In conclusion, it is important to decrease the temperature of our planet because increases its temperature may lead to ice melt and increase water and
finally sink our planet. The planet won’t sink but our houses will.
Suggestions: You need to work on the following areas:
- Writing introduction.
- Writing conclusion.
- Active Voice.
- Sentence Structure.
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