IELTS Academic Task 1 Correction: Spending, Population, ​and Consumption in the World.

The following pie charts present World Spending, World Population, and Consumption of Resources.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given three pie charts provide information about world spending, world population, and consumption of resources.

Overall, the world spend spends (Subject-verb disagreement) most of their its income on food while only the USA and Europe consume more than half percentage 60 percent of global resources. Similarly, Asia is a densely populated continent compared to others. Article Mistakes (a, an, the)

The first chart shows that the world spend spends their 24 percent of its income on food followed by 18 percent on transportation (18 percent). The expenses on clothing and housing are just 6 percent and 12 percent prospectively respectively. Likewise, other miscellaneous  expenses is 40 percent for the world.

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Second chart reveals that, about 57 percent of world population is on lives in Asia, Europe and America covers same percentage of population that is 14 percentThe second chart reveals that while more than half of the world’s population lives in Asia, about 14 percent reside in Americas and Europe each.

In terms of Africa, only 10 percent of world population lives there. Africa supports 10 percent of global population. Other land masses support 5 percent of the total human population only.

With regards of consumption of resources, while USA and Europe consume more than half of the resources (60 percent) and only 40 percent of resources are consumed by other nations. (Passive Voice. Prefer Active Voice)

151 words. Bands = 6.0

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