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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Not less than 250 words. 40 minutes.
Without question, the crime of murder is an act of malevolence and can be really terrifying. It is often believed that
the by giving murderers death sentence, the society should be held responsible of involving in killing people. As a consequence, life in prison has been seen as a preferable penalty for murderers. While I am partially persuaded that this should be adequately appropriated in the society today, I also believe that death is the better punishment for murderers in some extreme cases. The following paragraphs will elaborate reasons to support my position with relevant examples. (No need to write this line. It’s obvious. The introduction is too long. Make it short.)
Firstly, putting murderers in prison will help to support investigations done on similar perpetrators of the crime. This is
very possible (Something is possible or impossible. If it is possible, you can’t give it a percentage or grade it.) if these murderers are thoroughly scrutinized and interrogated while in prison. It will assist law enforcement agencies to arrest other murderers and people committing similar crime. For instance, in 2005, South Africa law enforcing authorities were able imprison (imprison = apprehend) to apprehend more murdered and crime doers by absolutely scrutinizing initial murderers in their custody. (Some unnecessary words here. Please avoid them.)
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In addition, when murderers are kept in prison, it makes them
However, punishing murderers with a death penalty can serve as a deterrent to other persons involved in the same crime. When the executive system of government actively
implement implements this type of punishment, people become scared and as a result, they become more hesitant to be involved in future crime. In Nigeria, for example, cases of ritual killing have dramatically decreased from twenty percent to five percent since this was implemented declared an offense punishable with death three years ago. In fact, the rate of these killings decreased sharply from twenty percent to five percent.
In conclusion, the killing of people for selfish interests still
remain remains the bane of the society today. In most cases, life in prison is a preferable punishment for murderers, although, in some very bad situations, a death sentence is a better choice, thus the society cannot be guilty of killing people.
392 words. Analysis: You English language is fine. However, writing more than 300 words hurts you in two ways: It wastes time (takes more than 40 minutes) and exposes your mistakes. The more you write, the more you are exposed. The introduction is too long. Make it short. You’ve written three body paragraphs and three examples. Please restrict yourself to not more than two examples.
Bands = 7.0. You can score more by reducing your word count. BREVITY.
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