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IELTS/ PTE Essay Correction: Parenting Training Course – 1.

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Parents have a greater influence on their children’s future success than schools do. Governments should, therefore, provide ”parenting training courses” rather than ”teacher training courses”. Do you agree with this idea?

IELTS: 40 minutes, 250 words at least.

PTE: 20 minutes, 200 to 300 words.

Answer:

Please read the sample answer for this question HERE.

Undoubtedly, parents play a significant role in the cognitive development of their children. Inspite In spite of that Governments should provide parents training courses because they build parents are base builders of own children’s foundation for future success, while teachers reinforce the students toward success with their positive abilities. (41 words.)

On the one hand, children’s children learn basic things and morals of life from parents from birth to till (to and till have a similar function) the end of life. The home environment of children have a great has a significant impact on their mind. Pupils can learn many habits such as eating and talking from parents. For instance, if parents of a child fight in front of him, the child he grasps negative attitudes from the parents. Hence, positive parenting courses enables enable parents to adopt a positive attitude and maintain a healthy environment in the home while child nurturing a child. Furthermore, these courses help parents to understand children’s study related problems and give suggest sustainable solutions to children. (100 words.)

On the other hand, teachers also have an immense influence on pupils cognitive development. In school, teachers teach deliver education and build healthy habits in children’s personality so that children can interact with their peers, parents, and neighbor with a positive response. Moreover, teachers find several weaknesses of students in academic studies and help them to understand problems. However, teachers enhance pupils’ best qualities of children and these specialities of pupils which help them in future to choose right carrier career in the future(78 words.)

In conclusion, both teachers and parents are beneficial for character development of the children. If a government should provides these courses to both parents and teachers, they would will definitely help children to become responsible children as well as reliable citizens leading to social stability and economic prosperity in the long term(39 words.)

Total Words = 258. Bands = 6.5.

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