IELTS PTE Essay Correction: Solar Energy Becoming Popular.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

IELTS: 40 minutes, 250 words at least.

PTE: 20 minutes, 200 to 300 words.

Answer:

In the present scenario, solar energy is evolving at a significant level pace which (wrong usage of which. This signals that the “pace” has been used, not solar energy.) has been used domestically all around the globe. As it is the dawn of the era of globalization wherein we are facing problems such as global warming and pollution (Missing Link between “global warming and pollution” on one hand and “solar energy” on the other.). On the one hand, it is economical and affordable for the majority of rural people. On the other hand, it is not reachable (Do you mean accessibility?) to the masses and after sale service is not available. (73 words. A bit long for an introduction. Please make it short.)

Currently, across the board, many nations are coming together to support this initiative of the developing countries such as Bangladesh, India, Brazil and some African countries Nigeria (Logic is a respected principle in the English language. Some African countries are not an example of countries). For instance, United Nations is working in collaboration with Bangladesh government and they are lending them (Violation of a cherished principle: one pronoun refers to one noun only.) money with the easy monthly installments (EMI) which allows the end user to avail the benefits (which benefits. Please mention.). Moreover, it reduces the impact of global warming on our planet which is one of the major global issue issues. (76 words. Perfect length for a body paragraph.)

Nonetheless, (Nonetheless, however, nevertheless do not fit here) United Nations has acknowledged the problem and they (wrong pronoun) are it is working with the governments, NGOs and local agencies. But However, solar energy is not accessible to a majority of people in these countries. For instance, in Bangladesh and in India, though there are several villages which are equipped with the solar panels, at the same time, they are living in the dark because these agencies (Which agencies? Solar panels are not agencies. Use though construction to present contrasting ideas.) are not able to provide the after sale services. (70 words. Learn ARTICLES usage.)

To conclude, undoubtedly, it is the best way to utilize the renewable natural resources with the help of solar energy, but however, it has a long way go and a lot more to explore. In future, it could be has a potential to become the mainstream resource for domestic and commercial usage. (43 words.)

Total Words = 262 words. Bands = 6.0 to 6.5

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