IELTS Task 1 Academic: Unemployment Rates in U.K.

The graph shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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20 minutes, 150 Words at least.

Answer:

The given bar graph illustrates ladies female unemployment rates in four countries – (England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland) of the United Kingdom in between 2013 and 2014. Units are measured in percentage. (no need to mention the units.)

Overall, the unemployment in the United Kingdom was high in the year 2013 as opposed to 2014 (You can’t make this observation since there’s no data on the U.K and you simply can’t add the four numbers to give an estimate of the whole. Task response.). In three countries (England, Wales, and Northern Ireland) the unemployment was decreased, whereas it was increased in Scotland. (Keep it simple past tense. Not passive voice.)
First of all, there was a 0.3% percent decrease of in unemployment in England for the next year from 2013 to 2014 while in Scotland there was a 0.6% percent increment of unemployment, double that of England, during this period. It was double to that of England in number. (Note: Try linking any observation – double that of England – next to the numbers –  0.6 percent. Moreover, you can’t so this here since one is increasing and the other is decreasing.)
Sample sentence: The unemployment (subject of question) among females of England fell (verb) from 6.8 percent (numbers) in 2013 (years) to 6.5 percent (numbers) in 2014 (years), while that (subject of question) of Scotland increased (verb) from 6.1 percent (numbers ) to 6.7 percent (numbers) during this period (years).
Second of all, (There is no second) in Wales, a small decrement of 0.4% from 5.4 to 5.0% was observed between the years 2013 and 2014. The percentage of unemployment in the fourth country of United Kingdom fell down to by 1% (from 5.6% to 4.6%). Therefore it was the highest decrement of unemployment among the four countries.

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