IELTS Task 1, Academic Correction: Water Use – 1.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

global water use 1global water use 2

20 minutes, 150 words at least.

Answer:

The line graph illustrates the data about utilization of water in three different sectors such as Agriculture, Industrial, and Domestic in the world between 1900 to 2000 years and the chart table depicts the information about the per person consumption of water in Brazil and Democratic Republic Congo.

Overall, in the Global (Global = adjective. Needs a noun.) most of the water utilized for agricultural purposes in given years and each an individual‘s consumption of water in Brazil was 45 times higher as compared to Democratic Republic Congo.

Evidently, in 1900, the water used in the Agriculture sector around 500km3 which and it (which wrongly used. It refers to 500 km3 rather than water.) and it gradually dramatically rose to 3000 km3 in 2000. On the contrary, Industrial and household usage of water in beginning year was almost constant as well as equal (constant = equal) until 1940, however from 40s Industrial utilization slightly increased a little above than (don’t use than with above1000 km3 while the water consumption for Domestic purposes increased considerably least as compared to other two sectors in the world.

Nevertheless, (Nevertheless = in spite of that; wrong usage.) Brazil has 176 million population along with 26500 km2 irrigated land and Democratic Republic of Congo  has notably less number of people and irrigated land, however the water consumption by a per person in Brazil significantly high while Democratic Republic Congo has 45 times less utilization of about 8m3.

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