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IELTS Task 1 Academic Correction: Southland’s Main Exports.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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20 minutes, 150 words at least.

Answer:

The given bar chart depicts the data regarding Southland’s main exports of International tourism, dairy products and meat products in South land (exports are not in southland.) during 2000, 2015 and its forecasted figures forecast/projections for 2025.

Overall, it is evident from graph that the export in Southland increased dramatically in the domain of International tourism while the export of meat products decreased over the period. Considering the Diary product the export rose considerably before falling in 2025 as estimated.

International tourism was the greatest export earner among the three industries with more than 8 billion in 2000 (Discuss sentence structure with me: International tourism, with more than 8 billion pounds in revenue in 2000, was the greatest export earner among the three industries.) and it , It continues to increase steadily with almost 9 billion currently and is speculated to increase further reaching almost 10 billion in 2025.

However, the exports of Meat products dropped from 6 billion in 2000 to 5.5 billion in 2015 and is foreseen that the trade will continue to decline to decline consistently reaching almost half the export of International tourism in 2025.

While considering the trade of Diary products, the export The dairy product exports increased significantly from almost 7 billion in 2000 to around 10 billion in 2015 from 2000 to 2015 and it is projected that the trade the exports will drop by around 0.5 billion by the end of in 2025.

Paragraph structuring is fine. You’ve mentioned the main features and comparisons. Some issues in sentence structuring. Discuss them with me. Bands = 6.5.

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