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IELTS Academic Task 1 Correction: Map of an Island Before and After Construction of Tourist Facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Answer:

The given two maps illustrate a comparison (you will make a comparison. The maps just present a scenario. Do not mention anything that is NOT given in the answer.) of an island’s condition, before and after establishment of infrastructure to facilitate tourism. (The given maps present an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities such as accomodation, restaurant, footpath, vehicle track, and piers.)

Overall, it is a longitudinal piece of land with a length of about 200 meters (I can’t read 200 meters anywhere in the diagram. Avoid mentioning these unstated facts.). Most of The construction is confined to middle and western part of island with sparing of and there is no activity on the eastern part. Original island’s tree population (cover) is retained even after construction.

The largest construction area is comprised of two accommodation plots, which have footpaths, with nine buildings in middle along with and (along with = together) six in western side of island. A restaurant is built on northern bank and a reception area, which have has tracks for vehicles, is constructed in between two tourist the accommodation plots.

The raw old beach is updated and opened for swimming and a footpath is made to links it with eastern accommodations. A pier is built at the southern bank of island to facilitate short tours on ships in sea (do not state the purpose of the pier. Perhaps it was built to receive tourists. Stick to the data given in the question. A pier has been constructed and it is connected to the reception and the restaurants through vehicle tracks.). Northern and southern extensions of main vehicle track, which surrounds reception, serve as link roads to restaurant and pier respectively.

The answer is well explained with correct grammar. Do not mention the data/facts that are not given in the question. You’ve mentioned everything about AFTER and nothing about BEFORE. Write one sentence for BEFORE as well.

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