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IELTS Essay Correction: Advice From Doctors OR Internet – 1.

advice from doctor or internet IELTS Essay May 2018

Some people prefer to get advice from doctors while others prefer internet for medical recommendations? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

40 minutes, 250 words at least.

Answer:

Some people prefer to search websites to treat their health problems because these are to free to use. However, others believe that it is better to visit to a doctor because he can check the patient’s problems and can suggest the best treatment (course of action). I agree with the latter view. (Perfect introduction!) (Use the alternative if you think treatment is repeated several times.)

One the one hand, many people prefer the internet to get information about their health issues because it is free of cost. There are many free medical blogs and forums where qualified doctors write posts and answer questions to treat many diseases. Since these applications are free to use, anyone can join them and can ask questions to certified medical practitioners regards one’s health issues. For instance, ‘mayoclinic.com’, a free medical help application, offers assistance for lungs and heart diseases. There are several pages on the website which explain the precautions heart patient should take. (You can offer me tough competition. Bravo!)

On the other hand, it is better to consult a doctor for medical issues rather than searching a cure on the internet.  Since online websites have general information about diseases, they cannot suggest a specific remedy for a patient’s health problems. Only a doctor can diagnose a person’s to discover the real reason for illness and can prescribe the right medicine to cure the problem. To illustrate, when we type ‘Headache’ on Google, we usually get hundreds of reasons for pain and suggestions to cure it. However, a person is never sure which one works for him and due to that sometime, one can choose the wrong only a doctor can propose (suggest) the right treatment. (Develop better context in the example.)

In conclusion, In my opinion, people should visit doctors to discuss their health problems because a medical specialist can asses the real health problems of a patient and, therefore, can suggest the best treatment plan.

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