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IELTS Essay Correction: Reduce Consumption Of Fossil Fuels.

The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce their consumption of fossil fuels such as gas, oil, and coal. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

40 minutes, 250 words at least.

Answer:

It is suggested by many environmentalists that all couturiers must work together to reduce the overall consumption of fossil fuels. I completely agree with this statement as it would be helpful in reducing levels of pollution and sustaining the non-renewable resources.

The level of pollution around the globe has risen dramatically in the last two decade due to a phenomenal growth of industries. This has resulted in insurmountable consequences such as the degradation of air and water quality, a rise in global temperature and change in climate patterns (Maintain parallelism using articles.). If governments of all countries make a pact to make concerted efforts to limit the use of fossil fuels, these problems can be addressed to an extent. It is clear that pollution originates originating from one country seriously impacts the ecological balance around the world. Therefore, it is better that the global community work together to stop further deterioration of the environment.

Furthermore, natural resources are being impending expended at an alarming speed. Some countries use non-renewable resources more than others. For example, consumption of petrol and diesel in developed countries such as the UK and the USA is much more than that of underdeveloped countries such as Ghana, Liberia. If the international community imposes sanctions or taxes on beyond maximum heavy taxes on the consumption of these fuels then they would stop the unscrupulous and incessant exploitation of natural resources. In turn, the government of a specific country would make efforts to raise awareness among in the public not to overuse their vehicles and to avoid extreme consumerism, which have a direct correlation with the consumption of natural resources. By doing so, non-renewable resources can be sustained and preserved for the distant future.

The arguments in both paragraphs are well argued and clearly developed.

In conclusion, as per my perspective, it is of current importance that the global community should shoulder the responsibility to keep the use of natural resources under check. They would surely reduce pollution levels and save these resources for the future.

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