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IELTS Academic Task 1 Correction: Percentage Of Water Used For Different Purposes.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

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Answer:

The pie charts compare the use of water for three different purposes in six regions of the world.

Overall, the highest percentage of water is used of in agricultural land (used for the agricultural purpose) in all countries regions, (“countries” is not the right synonym for regions. Moreover, these are not countries) except North America and Europe where most of the water is used for industrial purposes. The least percentage of water is used for domestic purposes in North America, Europe, and South East Asia(Mention the minimum and the maximum in this paragraph so that this paragraph is about COMPARISON between the three uses of water.)

For the industrial purpose, in North America and Europe, a similar quantity of water is used which is around 50 percent. In contrast, all other four countries regions (areas) utilize approximately 5 to 12 percent of water and the lowest by consumption is in Central Asia. (Paragraph on main features of industrial purpose and comparison between regions. Good.)

Comparatively, for agricultural purpose, Central Asia consumes 88 percent of water, which is the highest among all regions figure on the chart. While, Africa and South East Asia showed a similar usage of water, South America uses 70 71 percent. The remaining two continents use it the least, accounting for just around a third of the total. (Paragraph on main features of agricultural purpose and comparison between regions. Good.)

Finally, for household use, North America and Europe utilized (maintain present tense) utilize a similar percentage of water. This is followed by Africa, Central Asia and South America where around 9 percent water is used. South America consumes 19 percent of water, which is the highest figure for this purpose. (Paragraph on main features of domestic purpose and comparison between regions. Good.)

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