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IELTS Essay Correction: People Losing Interest In Teaching.

In some countries, people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Give reasons for your answer and include examples of your own experience.

40 minutes, 250 words at least.

Answer:

The following essay can be improved by using superior lexical resources (avoid using low band words and word-repetitions). The ideas are well argued and the example is nice. The response is specific and clear. There are a few sentence structuring issues which may impact the GR score.

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