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IELTS Letter Correction: Invite Classmate For Reunion.

Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion. Write

– When and where is the party 

– Give some details about what is going to happen at the party

– Tell him/her what you have been doing recently.

Answer:

Dear Danny,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to personally invite you to a get-together party that our class has orgranised to meet everyone after such a long time. (Wow! That’s a Looooooooong way of saying REUNION! Please avoid this tendency. Remember, he is a classmate. You guys share a bond. Be natural and informal in tone. It has been more than a decade when we last met during college days. You will be delighted to learn that the alumni association is organizing a reunion for our batch.)

The reunion It (Use a pronoun to refer to reunionwill be hosted at the Club Cabana near our college building. As you know that the 23rd of November is our (1) last day at the college, so the party is planned on the same day itself. (As you know that there is a long weekend in the last week of November, the party has been scheduled for 28th of that month.) All of our juniors and some of our teachers will also join the party. (1) The event will consist of an award distribution function, (parallelism) dinner and a small DJ party afterward.

1. You’ve misunderstood the question. REUNION is after you leave college. It is for former classmates.

Since everyone was out to some other cities for industrial training during this last semester of our gradution,(1) Since all our classmates have settled in different cities and have rarely met during the last few years, this will be a great opportunity to enjoy each other’s company and share experiences. good chance to see everyone after this long period of six months. I also moved to Delhi during this time to complete my training as a software developer at Google, Delhi, and I am coming back to college to see you all.

I am looking forward to meet you at the party.

Yours Lovingly,

Paras Dhawan

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